Interesting beginning... So far the development is nice. Looking forward to reading more
You got to keep updating and please don't like fall off the face of the Earth, very uncool. Love it by the way.
brianna (Chapter 4) - Thu 09 Jul 2015
Now i'm hooked. Did you know or did you yourself ever had heart surgery? I did as a kid still have to have yearly heart exams 25years later and i'm 26. Love to talk to people that had similar heart problems
rose (Chapter 4) - Thu 09 Jul 2015
next chapter please
Please update soon Please
katie (Chapter 3) - Tue 12 Apr 2011
wow that is so good please keep going u are doing a great job dont give up and keep at it
inugirl3 (Chapter 3) - Mon 10 Aug 2009
| that was so good please write more chapters PPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!
Genocide of the unfaithful (Chapter 2) - Wed 13 May 2009
| awsome i love it update like now yes right now lol no update soon both storys actually plz and thank u im glad u started back up
jojo661538 (Chapter 2) - Wed 06 May 2009
| gah i am so hooked already anyways keep up the great work ^_^
katie (Chapter 2) - Sat 02 May 2009
| wow i like it please keep going
April (Chapter 1) - Fri 01 May 2009
The only thing I don't get is how she could be more youkai then human but still more human than hanyou. That just doesn't add up. She can't be over half of both.
| Wow, this is so interesting! You have me on the edge of my seat, please write more soon!
| This is interesting. I'm really enjoying it, and look forward to reading more!
| OH this sounds like it's going to be good. I'll be waiting for more. If this were a tv show, this would be an excellent tag or teaser, it's left me wanting to see more. JEN
Okay I'm having deja vu....was this story on Single Spark? I remember reading this story someplace other an here. I believe I got up to the part where they were at the gym...or maybe it was the lunch room where Sesshomaru finds out about the foods that Kagome eats
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