I feel some strong emotion in this one, it has a darkfic feel. I do look forward to more. :)
Woot. I get first review. -dances about- I find this story interesting, and can't wait to see where it goes. Your AN is true. Some of the very best romances can be dark at times. Your writing is smooth, but I did pick up one small typo in like the 7th paragraph where it reads 'She could've killed over right then and there...' Typos suck, I'm really bad about them myself. Keep up the great writing.
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