Ok this was pretty hilarious! I was not expecting that turn of events, but was rooting for him the entire way. Perfume is of the devil! And hair spray! LOL
This was very good indeed. Full of gentle humour that just escalated with every paragraph. I laughed when I read of Sesshoumaru's surprise at Kagome's waxed legs and his thinking that she had a formiddable enemy who'd taken the trouble to torture her by pulling out each and every hair. So absolutely nutty!
And such a brilliant last line, "This Sesshoumaru likes feathers." Lol, makes the mind boggle as to what Sesshoumaru might have planned for Kagome and her boa.
I just liked this story immensely, it was a lovely feel-good read. Thank you very much for this entertaining interlude.
AAAAHHHH!! This was so hilarious!! I especially loved the ending! lol!
Hesunohana (Chapter 1) - Wed 14 Apr 2010
sweety !
Rikayu (Chapter 1) - Wed 13 May 2009
this gave me a good laugh. brilliant!
wawa (Chapter 1) - Wed 28 Jan 2009
Great story! I really liked Kagome's mother just pushing her away and saying she looked fine. You two did a fantastic job!
Wow that was really fuuny!! I love the scrubbing and boa part!! Great job guys!!
twiknham (Chapter 1) - Sat 24 Jan 2009
That was fun! I especially liked the scrubbing.
well done you two.
-TK
emmaren (Chapter 1) - Sat 24 Jan 2009
I loved this. I think that Kagome should become very active in protesting against testing on animals seeing how she has personal experience on how it feels now. Seriously, this had me giggling and feeling sorry for her throughout the entire thing. And I really liked the feather fedish.
Noacat (Chapter 1) - Sat 24 Jan 2009
Delicious, naughty and sweet... love it!
""Miko, what kind of torture is this? Your hair on your legs. Someone has pulled each one of them out." Sesshoumaru looked in awe as he examined the girl. He couldn't believe Kagome would have such a formidable enemy." ==> this has to be the most hilarious thing I have read in a while xD
Good job on the whole story, and the last comment made me crack up xD
*giggling* ;D Oh my. I think I would like feathers too after that encounter. I don't think it could have gone any worse! Lol Poor Kags, I really thought she might have time to shower before heading over, but it seems that was taken care of regaurdless. I don't know if I like y'all collaborating. I don't think my abs can take it. Too much laughter. My roommates already think I'm crazy, ya know? -^_^-
Thank you for sharing,
Kyuthe
Possessed (Chapter 1) - Sat 24 Jan 2009
ROFLMAO!!! I LOVE her mother!!! Her shoes sinking in the dirt, the crunchy hair, the waxed legs...omg...too much laughing!
I knew he'd like the boa, what's not to like? Nice job ladies!
Zoku (Chapter 1) - Sat 24 Jan 2009
AhahahahahhaaAWESOME!
Great Work. (As always)
ahahahaha! amazing. simply amazing. the ending couldn't have been any better. xD fantastic work, you two! keep it up! [ and for the record, 'noisy hair' cracked me up too. ]
One word...BRAVO! Loved it! It made me laugh - I could so see Sesshou taking her to get cleaned up, and I wanted to cry for her as she thought he would not want her after what her friends had done. Great piece indeed.
Nobody (Chapter 1) - Sat 24 Jan 2009
I am going to try this again. Too funny i had a blast and laughed a lot! Thanks PS this was too fun!
Nobody (Chapter 1) - Sat 24 Jan 2009
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