| How did I miss this being posted?! And I'd love to offer you some critique on how to improve, but there was nothing I noticed that needed improving! You dragged me alone from the first sentence and I was pissed to reach the end with no more to read. Update soon, Maru!
| This is a very good story. I want to be able to flame it....But I can't...I do want to see more of it...Please?
| Can we please have more? PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!
| It Is Quite Hard To Flame Something I Enjoyed. But I Did See One Typo Where Rin Had A Bit Of Food On Her.
| This is an exciting beginning to your story. I want to read more and more. I like how you did the first person view with Sesshoumaru, but why did he not use Tensaiga to bring back Rin and Jaken?
Great job and update real, real soon. I love it. :)
Kudos to your betas also.
*hugs and smiles*
Aaaaah... quite good, lad. We see that Sesshomaru is quite delusional with his own reasons. I like how you describe this from the inside of his head while showing us with his actions how he REALLY feels.
I look forward to the next chapter XD
Dewa mata
Nefret (Chapter 1) - Thu 22 Jan 2009
YAY! It's good to see this up. :) I'm so flattered that you trust me enough to work with you on this. :P
0o0o0o0o you finally loaded it up! i love the end of it! i wonder what your going to have happen! i cant wait to see! - r0o
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