The conversation between Ky and Yuri- very skillful writing. I am very seldom fond of the "point of view" style of writing. (Though there is one story being written right now in that style that I absolutely adore.) But the way you have done it, by inserting a moment between these two minor characters, was perfect! I said it before, you just get better and better all the time!
Hey!!! I love this story!!!! I can't wait for you to update it either!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! @___@ Or I will go crazy!!! >_> ano... i'm already there... T___T crap... oh well
momo (Chapter 18) - Thu 05 Feb 2009
i think you should remove this chapter and start a sequel.. maybe called "Games" because i find that the plot of the sotry is based on Kagome dialing the wrong number, misunderstandings and what not, then back together.
anywho, love love the story <3
| damn sesshomaru that was so arrogant, sneaky....and sexy lolz please continue soon
| finally i was waiting since last night for this update but it got too late so i said forget it....but i liked it and im happy you continued it or else i woulda been so mad at you....but anyway you better keep this going and you deserve the best lemon fic award i dont think ive read any fic like this like its that good
great! :D
can't wait to see the reactions of everyone at work! *grin*
please, please, update soon!!!
I love that... "I broke a nail... bastard!" I also love the stripes on his forearms. That's so understatedly sexy. Just like in real life, it's one little poignant detail like that that that gets more reaction from me than a whole page of gory detail. Just thos stripes, and ooohhh....
I've been loving this series right along... excellent plot, great imagination, terrific writing... but to make us wait for the rest of the chapter until after AMERICAN IDOL??? That's just SOOOOOO wrong, on so many different levels, I can barely type!! Ok, I guess authors have to have their 'fixes' too, but SRSLY! Way to hook me into watching for the updates, though... as if I wasn't hooked already! *snicker* Good job!!!! :-) ~~Wiccan~~
| damn i loved chapter 14-16 and poor sesshomaru thought she left him..i thought she left him, that was good i liked it and i love the office sex scene, and the caramel, that sounds sweet and kagome up against the window, your giving me ideas.......lolz jp, jp.....but anyway hope this aint the end so please continue soon
| Excellent...I'm much too exhausted from the passion to say anything else. JEN
| that had to be the sexiest and hottest one of all. love it!
The best part is, with this story I don't have to pick between angst and misery and hott, explicit action. Both wrapped up in a juicy little bundle! I'm so glad Sess didn't let her quit, cause as long as she keeps working for him, there's always plenty of room for misunderstandings and lovely make-up sex (idea for a sequel? hint, hint...)
| I will never think of caramel the same way after this. I will always remember Sesshoumaru and Kagome. Oh gods, I have serious problems.
Caramel sauce, hmmmm... That's a much nicer texture than chocolate! Purrfect...
LC Rose (Chapter 15) - Fri 30 Jan 2009
| Another wonderful chapter full of thrills, chills, and laughter. "You forgot how didn't you? Tab A into slot B ,imbecile!!" I loved that line and when he told her to perpare herself, I got shivers. Oohhh... You must give us more, please.
Lemony goodness!! Haha!! This chapter was just pure sexy! And poor Sesshoumaru! The temptation was just too much for him haha. . .
Wow, he really lost his cool in this chapter. LOL, poor trellis, poor sod. I loved the last line in the chapter as well, ended it perfectly.
| Wow. Seems as if Sesshoumaru 'snapped' for a moment there.... but it's okay, we still love'em XD
She went to change into her dress, didn't she... These two just can't get it right. Darn, I loved your description of the rooftop garden, it sounded so perfect. But it sounds like they might make up in the wreckage.
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