You are the funniest writer ever! I love the way you right, Please please continue!!!
Nobody (Chapter 1) - Thu 15 Jan 2009
| i love jakotsu so i love this, too funny, and somehow i can so see kagome doing all of these things. Great job.
| OMG I loved it. The end of this chapter was just to cute. I'll wait for the ext one. :)
this was really good i loved it Black lace always did fit you made me laugh my ass off! Keep up the good work!
Anonymous (Chapter 1) - Wed 14 Jan 2009
This is interesting so far. I believe I only saw one grammar error, which is good. I like how you show Kagome's flaws in the first chapter alone. It seems like she clutters a lot. Please continue.
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