You, madam, are the queen of suspense!
I love all that you are writing, and I will continue to read! :D
Sesshyangel (Chapter 19) - Sat 28 Feb 2009
| What a thrill! And a pleasure to read this. It was just the pick-me-up that I needed to get me out of my depressed mood. Thank you, for this wonderful gift.
I am impressed that Seshoumaru ventured to express the extent of his feelings for her. But I must say, that he avoided words to do so, is more typical of him than for it to have been do any other way. Perfect. (I also can't believe that you said that Sesshou would be furious after learning Fuji's true identity! FIrst of all, spoilers! Lol. But it also sounds as if he would turn her out for it. I understand, and can almost expect him to feel betrayed, but in the face of his feelings for her, shouldn't that pale in comparison?)
| Your fiction is so conservative and beautiful. Throughout the story my imagination was able to picture every single details you've written and the interaction between the main characters is incredible; I've fallen in love with them and I've fallen in love with your story. The mystery of the Shikon shard is definitely a mystery that left me wondering for hours and I only hope the person who has it is not anything like Naraku.
Love is quite a strong emotion and for Lord Sesshoumaru to feel such thing, I feel is the most endearing thing ever. I love Sesshoumaru but I love him even more when he is in love.
You have done a terrific job in charactizing Lord Sesshoumaru. I felt that you have somehow shown a side of Sesshoumaru we have not seen in the anime without loosing the real Sesshoumaru.
I only hope he will not be to angered once he discovers Kagome's secret; maybe his love for her is strong enough to overlook such things.
Adria_Li (Chapter 23) - Sat 28 Feb 2009
Nooo! I must know what happens next. The classic cliffhanger at the end of the chapter makes me anxious. Please continue this story. I truly enjoy it!
So does this mean that Oka and Ume are imposters? Or are they the ones who stole the shard? And how will Sesshou react to Fuji's secret? Will he abandon her? I can't wait to see what Sesshou has in store for her. Keep up the good work and update soon. :P
| I really enjoy reading this story! I'm excited to see what will happen with Kagome and Sesshoumaru as well with the jewel shard.
Hmmmm... I'm intrigued, but I think I have some ideas about what's going on...
Yup, Sesshomaru's arm was 'recuperated' in the form of Bakusaiga (it's the name of the chapter too...). http://www.onemanga.com/Inuyasha/518/01/ if you want to read this chapter, or even the manga...
Well, I quite like the idea of Sesshomaru having it back. It can be a powerful image, him becoming whole again...
Very good chapter, as always.
Dewa mata
Akay (Chapter 23) - Sat 28 Feb 2009
| Part of me just wants her to go ahead and tell him already. Then there's the other part that wants her to wait just a little bit longer or drop some more hints so he can figure it out himself. But he's so into Fuji I don't think he's getting the hints lol. Anyways I love this chapter. Sweet indeed. Loved how she tricked Jaken. OMG Sesshoumaru is so freaking romantic. *dances happily*
Amrix (Chapter 23) - Sat 28 Feb 2009
| AAhhh! Kagome was really close on telling sesshomaru the truth wasn't she? God I wonder what will happen next! Love the chapter :P
| Ok, so you want my honest reaction, right? I know you expect no less from me, sooo, is that all? Where's the dang rest of it? You brought me so into the experience of having his arm so protectively around me,er,her and she's getting ready to tell him what's on her mind and you just leave it there??? Whoa a minute there. You left me hanging here! And I know you girls REALLY just love to keep us hanging on and guessing. Admit it, you DO love our frustration, huh? At least have him try just alittle bit to get her to feel she can trust him not to think wrongly of her if she confides in him. This IS technically their last night together. I can't wait for the next update...start typing quickly little girl, I need to have more. Love ya! JEN
I will never complain about you going on a writing rampage! This was beautiful and OH SO SWEET! Warm and fuzzy feelings all over ^_^
If Kagom'e going to tell him, she should at least wait until they're on solid ground, lol! That's a loooonnnnggg way down.
| I'm impressed at how fast you are updating this story. I was hoping that she would begin telling her story to Sess. I love how you have made this Sessshomaru a romantic being...I hope he stays this way even when he finds out the truth of Fuji. But that is highly doubtful, but I don't think he will turn his back on her for long. He loves her too much for that :) I really enjoyed this chapter (too short) *giggles* Beggars cannot be chosers, therefore I enjoyed every little bit of your stories that you put up for us to read. As usual, my dear, many *hugs and smiles*
Looking forward to more and more updates as your time permits.
Vicky (Chapter 23) - Fri 27 Feb 2009
Love it...I can't wait to read the next chapter.
This is the best part of the chapter:
"And if I fall?" She asked adorably, grateful that she was sitting with her back facing him, so he could not see the smiles which kept appearing on her face.
Just like the gentleman he always was, Sesshoumaru answered her seriously, "Then I will fall with you."
They are talking about falling in love and not about falling off of Ah-Un. Awww.
Ah, perhaps Oka herself is not who she seems to be anymore.
Miju (Chapter 22) - Thu 26 Feb 2009
| the plot isnt too tiring to read...
i revewied, so can i have the next chapter? with over sexified sessho? yay!
giannix (Chapter 22) - Thu 26 Feb 2009
| thanks for this new chapter!! i cant wait until their third meeting!!.. good job =)
That stupid green piece of crap! – I don't know why, but that made me laugh like a hyena.
Oh my... the plot thickens, indeed! Methinks there's more to Oka than meets the eye. I absolutely loved this chapter. You finally addressed the potential of Sesshoumaru's (and Kagome's) desire. After all, that certainly comes with the territory of developing feelings, but there's no hiding anymore when you get that close, Kagome!! I *really* hope the truth doesn't come out when they're in a compromising situation. Can we say "awkward"? Yes, yes we can.
I'm worried for more than that, though. Whatever stole that jewel shard is still lurking out there... Kagome's in danger Sesshoumaru! Do that stoic protection thing you do, pronto!!
Great stuff, as always, hun! Keep it up!
| I am getting so antsy now. I can hardly wait for the next chapters involving S/K. Also the intriguing plot about the jewel and Sess finally finding out about the true indentity of Fuji. As always, lots of *hugs and smiles*.
Akay (Chapter 22) - Thu 26 Feb 2009
| Oh and can I say that I totally don't trust Ume/Oka anymore? Yeah....
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