*WOULDN'T just end there. haha sorry, just wanted to correct my review VVVV
Cute story, but I didn't really like the ending all that much. It seemed to have come out of no where and was very rushed. They went from kissing one second, to there being a fire, to him disappearing... I don't know, I just think you could have wrapped it up better, or at least have continued it so it would just end there.
black moon inu (Chapter 1) - Fri 02 Jan 2009
| Maru maru if you hadn't said that this was the first time for a womans view i wouldn't have guessed it. I liked it alot I would even go so far as to say that i WOULDN'T mind a sequal to this. hint hint. Well happy new years and I hope to talk to you soon.
hugs and puppies
black moon inu (Chapter 1) - Fri 02 Jan 2009
| Maru maru if you hadn't said that this was the first time for a womans view i wouldn't have guessed it. I liked it alot I would even go so far as to say that i WOULDN'T mind a sequal to this. hint hint. Well happy new years and I hope to talk to you soon.
hugs and puppies
Emiko (Chapter 1) - Thu 01 Jan 2009
| Wow! I really like this one =) I was almost afraid she was gonna lose! Great job and even better timing, lol. But what the hell was up w/Sessh vanishing like that?! I am gonna find him, give him a piece of my mind and punish him. Yes, he has been a VERY naughty boy!! *mind floats down a gutter*
<3 L
LC Rose (Chapter 1) - Wed 31 Dec 2008
| Maru strikes again!!! If you're not careful, you'll be a regular, boy. :-) And I really liked this one. For a guy, you wrote Kagome well. *hugs Maru with love* Such a pity she didn't get to find out the guy's name. Something written from experience, Maru?
Possessed (Chapter 1) - Wed 31 Dec 2008
LOL, poor Kagome! If it wasn't for bad luck, she'd have no luck at all! You wrote this rather well from her standpoint, though with her petite build, I'd think six glasses of wine would plant her on the floor long before midnight! Ah well, it is fiction, after all... Very nice entry and Karma point for you for firing up the confetti!
| Well now, that was nice. I can see this turning into a longer story...can you? Great job except for a few minor grammatical errors. :) *hugs and smiles*
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