Oh what an ending. Sesshoumaru's list: One miko--check.
Oh, no, how can you possibly stop now! I was hoping you would make it really, really long! (You could always write another story that's similar, but more involved). Do I have any complaints about the way this ended? The ending was so ambiguous that it was almost like real life.... which always allows for a "to be continued" even if it only in the reader's imagination.
Augh. Woman!
It's beautiful then all of a sudden, he leaves her! At first I was a little frustrated, but after thinking about it for about a minute, I realized that you have the perfect ending. Sesshoumaru leaves, and even though Kagome has experienced him in one of the most intimate encounters, the man is still a mystery. Great work!!
Is she dreaming, or is she awake? I don't care, just keep writing, please!
Oh, my god....
ooh!! Go kagome! LOL.
Ah! I caught the indigo! Points for me!
Violet is a naughty color... I can already tell ;)
Well she is making a pig's breakfast out of her morning after, isn't she?
Iris Ha (Chapter 5) - Fri 02 Jan 2009
| AHHHHHH!!! that chapter was such a teaser! please write more soon! ^_^
Ah, so it was a dream. Vivid dreams are the most torturous, but thankfully, I don't have that many.
You've portrayed Kagome nicely in all of her awkward hormonal glory. I can't wait to read purple... or will it be indigo then violet?
oooohhh.... dream or no? Hmmmm..... more more more more more please!! :D
Good Grief!!!!
Your thought-provoking. image-provoking fantasy ride just melted my CHAIR!
You ought to be bottled and let out only very little at a time. You are dangerous. I sincerely hope that you won SOMETHING for this little sexshomaru fantasy trip. This was great, beyond great. You are most talented.
I believe you captured their characters deeply. You brought them to life. THis is the mark of an exceptional writer. You have quickly become one of my favorites. Are you going to continue this?
I will look for other stories by you. Thank you
Til next time, Deb.
Alright, I am going to go out on a limb and say it was not a dream.
that was great!
LC Rose (Chapter 4) - Fri 02 Jan 2009
| Ah you've blessed me with another chapter!! YEAH! And this one was most satisfying. But was it really a dream? Or is Fluffy playing at something?
Oooohhh yoouuuu!!! You did it again! You have made me super happy etcs.
Finally someone put the woman on top. Hell yes! Can't wait for more updates until you fall off the face of the earth.
| love your style you have me on the edge of my sit wishing there was more..lol good job
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