Well that was humiliating for Kagome. Well written.
This is a great insight into the world that is Sesshoumaru. I know on this site we want Sess and Kag to be in a relationship, but I think this little work of fiction greatly describes how he would be an older brother figure as well.
Characterization besides, I have to applaud the fact that you got 800 words exactly. There's no way I could ever do that!
Nobody (Chapter 1) - Mon 29 Dec 2008
OMG, i love the way you interpreted it! THis fic was beautifully done, funny. ANd the description awesome. You are an amazing writer! I am actually going to go to your profile after this and see if you have more. Great job!
Jupe (Chapter 1) - Mon 29 Dec 2008
Oooh! It was cute and funny and bittersweet all at once, reading in almost a painfully poetic fashion. Lovely characterizations, excellent dialogue, and true-to-life actions. (I, too, have spun flowers between my fingers until they blurred)
Possessed (Chapter 1) - Mon 29 Dec 2008
Oh I loved this! You have his character down, hers too! Very nice take on this challenge! Karma for you!
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