Great story! Well-written and full of tangy, LEMONY goodness! Thank you! You totally satisfied my craving...for lemonade!
I believe you stayed true to Kagome and Sess' characters. Loved that you started the story from Sess rescuing Kagome from Mukotsu only for both of them to succumb to each other. How ironic! Great and believable storyline-it makes sense the toxin could stay in your system and have some interesting repercussions!
This is the 2nd time I've read this and it's still just as captivating!
So good
Tara (Chapter 8) - Thu 16 Nov 2017
Loved it! Albeit very explicit; however, it was pleasant to find it neither raunchy or crass. Very well written, wonderful work. This is one of my faves, thank you.
Raynell (Chapter 7) - Wed 02 Sep 2015
Minimal plot, my ass. This is an awesome story and the depth of feeling within is just amazing. My heart is breaking just from this chapter. I love this story so much. You're a wonderful writer.
zandria (Chapter 1) - Tue 20 Mar 2012
love your stories can't wait fot the next updates :)
wickedone43 (Chapter 8) - Wed 15 Feb 2012
You have no idea how long I looked, search, and inquired about this fic! Your fic! It has been a year since I last read up to chapter 4 I believe. Well, it was worth the wait.
AWESOME!!!!!
Thank you for this fic. I love it!
zandria (Chapter 1) - Mon 30 Jan 2012
this story is so amazing i can't wait for the next update :)
...um (Chapter 8) - Sun 19 Sep 2010
Really good! detailed in all the right places, and you kept everyone in character (even shippo!)
Please tell me you are going to continue this! I absolutely love it and have read it numerous times, I cannot wait to see what happens next!
That was a great set of chapter stories!! Well written and thought out.
This story was absolutely amazing! I really love the way you made their relationship gradually become stronger with each encounter... but, we all know sex induced relationships dont normally work out in real life (there are always exeptions, lol).
Keep up with your awesome writing skills, maybe publish a novel one day.... I'll be your first buyer ;)
Again, great story!
Li-Li (Chapter 8) - Sat 09 May 2009
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Oh yay, you finished! I'm so happy you did! It was almost torture being left to wonder how you'd end. I love your writing! Your plot moves at a good pace and you throw in some humor to balance it out and not let things get too dramatic and angsty. Your dialogue is succinct. Your grammar and sentence structure is superb. I am thankful you’ve spared the reader from ridiculous nicknames for body parts like "mounds" and "manhood" and that you stuck to correct anatomy and realism. Honestly your K/S NC-17 material has been the most enjoyable I’ve read thus far and I am not embarrassed to admit that those sections were a turn on! lol Best of all, your characterization of Kagome and Sesshoumaru it is accurate and in my opinion neither act out of character considering the situation you’ve put them. It is of course then natural to assume one thing: you’re brilliant! : ) If you ever write again, I’ll gladly read and review! Thank you for sharing this thoroughly entertaining story.
claire (Chapter 1) - Tue 30 Dec 2008
| i love your stories so much. a simple legacy and mere digression are part of my sess/kags favorites. i'm really glad that you finished mere digression. I was following it at a single spark and it saddened me that it had to close down. I love that they were so much close to how I imagined how their characters were supposed to act. Is there gonna be a part two though? about sesshoumaru travelling with kagome's group?
Solelight (Chapter 8) - Sun 28 Dec 2008
| i loved, and I mean [LOVED], your story. THey were both so in character, it was so pleasant to read, more than pleasant. You have a natural gift to captivate with your story. I most liked the reality of it all, how the real characters could totally act how you described. Awesome!
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love, Solelight
Marija (Chapter 8) - Sun 28 Dec 2008
Great story and very well written. It's the best one I've come across in a long while.
| That was so cute! Awesome job with the story! I love it!
Yay! An excellent happy ending, after all this time. I love it!
Aw, poor Sesshomaru. Poor Kagome. Why does he have to be so stubborn?
It's not because of the poison anymore! Yay!
Inuyasha's such an ass. This is why I don't think they belong together. Even if he does go through an attitude adjustment, this kind of treatment should not be forgiven.
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