Again, ethereal. I really don't know what else to say! Every chapter shines.
Oh. My. GAWD. This is so hauntingly, heartbreakingly BEAUTIFUL!!! I can hardly wait for the last two "chapters;" it is THAT captivating. I shouldn't still be awake at this hour, but I just HAD to read this - frankly, I was going to wait until it was done, but I couldn't. You are DAMN good, did you know that?? DAMN GOOD!!!! I can hardly wait to see what you come up with for the last two although, judging from what I've already read, I KNOW they'll be fantastic. My mind runs through all the superlatives in my vocabulary, but they seem to pale in comparison to the feelings evoked. KUDOS, m'dear!! And thank you for sharing the goodness with us all!!! :D ~~me~~
| Oh please don't tell me you're going to end it here??? I just got the feeling that this was a good place to end this fic and I desparately hope I am wrong. JEN
tieisme (Chapter 10) - Wed 17 Dec 2008
| Another mind blowing chapter! I am going to be so sad when this wonderful and heart felt story ends!
Rayne (Chapter 9) - Tue 16 Dec 2008
| I'm crying...
Wow
You know... I just don't have much to say.
When a good writer uses words, he can transform them into images and emotions, and sometimes, only sometimes, those words can transform into tears.
This is kind of like magic, I mean, how come someone can change some clusters of black pixels into something so touching that one could cry over it?
But well, you've done it. Your words overwhelmed me and I cried. I still do.
A parent should never survive it's child.
Thank you.
Dewa mata
| Oh my gosh...what a heavy weight his heart has had to carry all this time. So, he has written this down but he can't possibly release this for the public to read in his books because then Kagome would know that she was there when Rin, Jaken and InuYasha died. She might change the future if she tries to prevent this from happening...unless they had no role in future events...Kagome, herself, wasn't meant to be in the past...gahhh, how does one know what will effect the time and future events. I can't wait to see how you answer this. And I sooo wish there was a way to get Sesshoumaru to believe he was NOT responsible for what happened. We can't lock our children up in their room forever and it's only natural that things will happen that are beyond our control. Rin was a free spirited child and she was protected as much as any child could be and more so (she had Jaken with the staff of two heads and Sesshoumaru when he was near). None of this matters though because we as thinking and feeling creatures will always believe that we could have done something more. Sorry I'm so long winded...this really has touched my maternal heart and I wish I could help soothe the pain. Guess this means you are doing a great job. JEN
| I love your story, This is quickly becoming my favorite. Please keep the creativity flowing.
| That was so sad and heartbreaking. It made me cry.
tieisme (Chapter 9) - Mon 15 Dec 2008
| It is so rare when I crave for a new chapter of a story to come out.
I have enjoyed the last nine chapters and I am looking forward to the next three.
Keep up the good work!
| Ok now, you got me crying. Effect complete. That was just so amazing. I could see and feel everything he did. She accomplished her goal, tenfold. JEN
Please allow me a moment of blubbering....15 seconds...alright. I swear to all that is holy, you plucked the scene of Sesshoumaru discovering the DVD right out of my head. It moved precisely how I pictured it, right down to the alcohol and kneeling in front of the TV. But the blanket...the blanket...it was the perfect touch. Utter magic. And the addendum with Inuyasha and Kagome wasn't too shabby, either. Oh, who am I kidding? It was icing on the cake, a nice layer of foreshadowing with just a sprinkle of heartwarming fluff. I appreciate that you don't resort to making Inuyasha, or anyone, the bad guy. This story is so much more than that, and its realism makes it that much more romantic. Again, absolutely beautiful!!!
| So I'm getting one of my soul-stealers to type this review, because that scene between Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha killed me, you see, but I had to get back here somehow and let you know. Oh...my...GodIlovethisfic. You measure each scene so precisely, with just the right blend of dialog, drama and description. The mood you evoke is just...just...*sigh*. I cannot WAIT to see how Sesshoumaru reacts to what's in the package, and honestly, to see how Inuyasha reacts to EVERYTHING after than conversation. I need a cigarette after that chapter (even though I don't smoke. Just say no, kids!) because Lord knows I am spent. Love it.
| This is absolutely beautiful. I am glad she was able to get recordings of Rin for him to see her again. InuYasha asking that his brother look out for Kagome was so moving. The exchanging of gifts between Kagome and Sesshoumaru was so sweet and an endearing way to begin a new friendship. May the healing begin for our beloved Sesshoumaru. JEN
swasdiva (Chapter 6) - Sat 13 Dec 2008
| Oh my...oh...be still, my beating heart. Absolutely lovely. Your language always sings to me, but your particular metaphor of Rin and Kagome being the moon to the tide of his heart made me shiver. Such beautiful, poetic language I can hardly stand it. You ease emotions into the scenery so subtly I'm overwhelmed by the tenderness of it. I liked how you inserted the video camera and began with Rin asleep. Just...lovely.
And what is this shift in the wind with Inuyasha smelling Sesshoumaru? I'm dying to see how that develops.
This story grows more amazing with every chapter.
| Ooh, this is absolutely marvelous! The emotions are portrayed very well. I love it and I eagerly await more!!
| Ooh, this is absolutely marvelous! The emotions are portrayed very well. I love it and I eagerly await more!!
bluefire1 (Chapter 6) - Sat 13 Dec 2008
| I love your story. I can't wait to see what happens next.
I love this story so far. The characterizations are perfect, the pace of the action is great, the tone is just right for the emotion of it all, and it's not too wordy or too sparse. You've done a fantastic job. I especially liked the line about Kagome and Rin being the moon to Sesshoumaru's soul. Very poetic, great way to get the idea across. The chapters are a little shorter than I expected, but that's okay because they're not fillers, something always happens and you've updated so quickly!
awe i cant help but want more. update -pouts-
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