Love it. Update soon!
I wanna see what happens ;]
~kukuro :3
emmaren (Chapter 1) - Wed 03 Dec 2008
| I like your story and I am looking forward to more. I do have a suggestion and it has to do with formating. The large blocks of text make it easy to lose your place while reading so and easy way to break it up is make all diaolgue its own paragraph. Thank you.
| I like the story I hope that you keep going with it.
LC Rose (Chapter 1) - Tue 02 Dec 2008
| What a nice way to meet! hehehe I am awaiting more, please.
I think that this is a very good start to your story. I can't wait to see what happens next!
SEB (Chapter 1) - Tue 02 Dec 2008
| Fun start! The thought of Sesshomaru needing help from InuYasha is intriguing.
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