This was a great start to your fan fic. I was dissappointed that there wasnt anymore chapters to read. You really should continue this fan fic. It is going great so far.
| WELL i said id review and i am i found this story fun to read and like how it almost seemed like poetic justice. GO SHIPPO. lol It would have been funny to see how kagome reacted to the puppet but oh well. hope to read more from you soon.
hugs and puppies
DemonQueen17 (Chapter 1) - Mon 01 Dec 2008
| It's official. Shippou has a death wish, but this is really funny. ^_^
Nobody (Chapter 1) - Mon 01 Dec 2008
Aw it was cute, great challenge fic. I was a little worried as to when it was going to become sesskag. Bu you did it! Wonderful
i laughed at this but at the end i found that i was confused about the courted one for a moment, and Sesshomaru's comment aobut sharing.
i do think that it was good but it could use a bit more explaining...about Sess and Kags being courted i tihnk?
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