OMG!!! yay!!! loved...absolutely loved this story! I cant wait to see what happens next! i hope they decide to go with the natural way of things than what they are trying to do with the IFV. hmmm this is such a great story! please update asap! 

Excellent writing. Kagome is a little more polite than I imagined, but it's a nice change of pace from the stories where she's especially crass and unaware of boundaries--and more fitting for the older age you have her as here. It's been a while since I was willing to try a new story from an unfamiliar author, but your plot is also very unique. I've been reading sess/kags for almost twenty years now and it's very refreshing to see a different play on ideas. Really great work and I can't wait to see what happens next. I'm all for the slow burn build up but I also hope they finally get their feelings out in the air now. :))