There is a suprising non-reaction from Kagome here about the deaths of her traveling companions. Not a single word of worry of what happened to their bodies, no remose over her foolhardy plan that lead to their demise, not even a single tear of guilt or shame. I'm dissappointed with you Kagome :(
Anamika (Chapter 62) - Wed 10 Dec 2008
| I wanted to review in between the chapters say around 'Solitude of a fallen star' but couldn't. I read it all in one go. It was nicely written and I did get a bit too emotional amidst the beautifully crafted pic.You have chosen the chapter titles wonderfully. And I find whatever you wanted to convey through words you have done a terrific job at that as well. Overall the idea was a good hit and a good read too. I liked the plot and sequence of the happenings, from their meetings 'ruled by secrecy' to Kag's departure to the not so OOC behaviour of icicle- sama (Don't tell him I called himthat! Winks) and I also loved the Haiku's plus laods of others. Good jod done!
Lilium (Chapter 62) - Sun 07 Dec 2008
Ahhhh...amazing, beautiful. This was a great story. Please write more!!!! You have an awesome talent...I would love to read your other stories and more! AWESOME!!! Def. favorite ~ Lilium
Lilium (Chapter 52) - Fri 05 Dec 2008
AMAZING!!! Please update soon!!! This story is so good and addicting. I love the whole concept about "He's so evil, he's tainted white and she's so good, she's pure black" soooo original and imaginative! Please continue, your story is...is...there are no words to describe it. Remarkable, beautiful...WOAH! Also...Kagome going to hell?!?! Can't wait to read what happens. AGAIN, UPDATE SOON!! :) ~Lilium
Lilium (Chapter 52) - Fri 05 Dec 2008
AMAZING!!! Please update soon!!! This story is so good and addicting. I love the whole concept about "He's so evil, he's tainted white and she's so good, she's pure black" soooo original and imaginative! Please continue, your story is...is...there are no words to describe it. Remarkable, beautiful...WOAH! Also...Kagome going to hell?!?! Can't wait to read what happens. AGAIN, UPDATE SOON!! :) ~Lilium
Lilium (Chapter 20) - Tue 02 Dec 2008
Please continue Roune! This is a great story!! I'm hooked. Update soon or you'll kill me. LOL
Zoku (Chapter 10) - Tue 02 Dec 2008
The story is great, and this is the second time I've found it,(before on SS) but I am kind of curious as to what has happened with the 3 companions? The story jumped and didn't click back into the same story line you had going. It could be fixed with a simple paragraph or two where Kagome worries after the 3's well being or something? It just leaves a bit of a ?????? feeling when moving from the middle of Chapter 10 to its conclusion. Even after writing that Kagome and Sesshoumaru stay at the same hut she had stayed in earlier, you don"t write anything more about them, also you write that she doesn't know where the hot spring would be, but as you wrote it was the same hut she should have known...nit-picky so I apologize, as I am no author.
That being said, I do look forward to upcoming chapters and wish you the best of luck writing them!
Thank you!!!!!
Lady Scheherazadea (Chapter 1) - Sun 30 Nov 2008
I'm happy to see you post over here! I love your story!
Nyuka (Chapter 1) - Sun 23 Nov 2008
| Are you really going to rewrite it???...hmmm Too bad.....and I'm glad at the same time...weird no???....I liked were the story was heading when you left off...even if it seemed a bit of a random story plot getting there....but I would love to see what you will do to change it with the same beginning...I wander if Kagome will have to do those tasks again...hehe.....and even though its your first story your very articulet with your word...its a story not a summery like I've seen in alot of first fic's...>.<...love it...XD.........Nyuka
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