Reviews for Made to Order by Chiaztolite

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KShadeslady (Chapter 10) - Sat 12 Aug 2023

Wonderful sad chapter. Why would she want that jerk when she has Seesh? That explains a lot of her issues. But dang girl! You got the better part of that deal. He will find a way. 


Yash1 (Chapter 10) - Sat 12 Aug 2023

WOW! Such a great story!


cherry20052 (Chapter 10) - Sat 12 Aug 2023

To start this is a wonderful story and idea and I can't wait for the future chapters. With that said, the more I read it, the more I just want to shake Kagome. Whether she got what she was expecting or not, she made zero prepartions for a husband, so all the heavy lifting to make the marriage work feels like its on Sesshomaru's shoulders. She dismissed and insulted his feelings when he tried to make her feel better, she didn't deal with her feelings on her ex, told no one she ordered a husband, and then has the nerve to be disappointed when Sesshoumaru doesn't speak what's on his mind after dealing with the chaos she put him in due to all of that. I hope someone or something gives her a reality check so she can do some serious introspecting. 


SmilingFool (Chapter 10) - Sat 12 Aug 2023

So sad but understanding what happened is vital but overcoming the fact will make him stronger for his marriage and be the champion Kagome needs that will strengthen the love they don't know is there.


Young Kagome (Chapter 9) - Wed 26 Jul 2023

Mother!? 


InumeT_FlyGirl (Chapter 1) - Sun 16 Jul 2023

This is certainly interesting! Not sure if you are a gamer but if you have played Detroit becomes human the idea of AI (Androids) having full blown human emotions was the centerpiece of decisions you made in the game. Sesshoumarus character is like the 3 protagonist where it seems like a struggle to decipher if his emotions are real or programmed! But in a different way. He is the "perfect" husband and made specifically for Kagome. His feelings would not-to my understanding-stray from her in any circumstance. Which logically for Kagome is always in the back of her mind...anyway I did all that rambling to say that I look forward to the next installment and thoroughly enjoy your writing. 

Thank you! 


A (Chapter 9) - Thu 13 Jul 2023

Ouch, poor Sesshomaru...Kagome is certainly behaving as if he is simply a function of his programming.   Some celebration they had.  On top of the insecurities of the 'secret' marriage he isn't wrong to think he's not entirely wanted after all these revelations. 


KShadeslady (Chapter 9) - Thu 13 Jul 2023

Ohhh...this is an interesting bit at the end. That chapter was so good. Poor Seeshomaru, he is quite real despite what they think. Kagome needs to be more conscious of what she says to him. 


SmilingFool (Chapter 9) - Wed 12 Jul 2023

Oh shit.......  This was an awesome chapter loved it..   Made up for the cliffy....  Anyways, I'm glad Sesshomaru told the couple off they deserved it.  I fear what the couple said about Sesshomaru and what Kagome may think that Sesshomaru is programmed to say what he does instead of having his own concious thought...  Hurt him deeper than he lets on.  I think Sesshomaru has concious thought and a soul even if he were made.  Now he found out where his looks came from but I wonder what he intends to do about it?  And who is mother?


MaivenTahl (Chapter 9) - Wed 12 Jul 2023

My heart is about to burst, I don't even want to know what is going through Sesshoumaru's head right now. Finding out that he was/is a character in one of her novels, or that she accidently sent his character profile instead of the actual made to order husband. 

Another one of your great works, thank you for the update!!!

XOXOXOX


A (Chapter 8) - Tue 11 Jul 2023

Such a rich story.   Can't wait to see where it goes.  Kinda hoping mama H throws out the rude 'guests'.  Haha


SkantySkylar (Chapter 8) - Tue 11 Jul 2023

THIS IS SO SO GOOD!!! Ugh the tension! The insecurities on BOTH sides! Just the concept alone is killer like this could genuinely be a book i pick up at the shops. Such a strong premise with such a vibrant writing style...bravo!!!! I cant wait to see where this leads!!!


SmilingFool (Chapter 8) - Sun 09 Jul 2023

I loved this chapter and knew Kikyo would be a bitch and ruin Kagome and Sesshomaru's welcoming dinner....  Oh man I'd slap the bitch and toss them out right there...  No good conieving self rightous bigots they need to be taught a lesson.  Though Kagome being once engaged to Suikotsu is not all that surprising.  Can't wait to read more this is too good.


KShadeslady (Chapter 8) - Sun 09 Jul 2023

Meow!! Break out those claws! But I do love a catty Kikyo that gets hers in the end. Can't wait to see where this goes. 


Anonymous (Chapter 7) - Sun 09 Jul 2023

The suspense is killing me. You're a very good writer and I like your story.


Young Kagome (Chapter 7) - Thu 08 Jun 2023

Time to meet the fam


Arc-an Angel (Chapter 7) - Sun 28 May 2023

I love the progress they're making with building emotional, physical, and mental intimacy between them. Hope it continues!


Anonymous (Chapter 7) - Tue 23 May 2023

Me encanta como ellos se van haciendo más cercanos

Me gusta sobretodo como él a pesar de no saber si tiene lo suficiente para hacer feliz a Kag  no se rinde. Y lo está haciendo muy bien. Ciertamente es un esposo hecho a la medida en todo sentido. 

De existir una fábrica para esposos así recibirían toneladas de solicitudes!

 

Pero ya apareció la peste, digo Kikkyo 


Neelixo (Chapter 7) - Tue 23 May 2023

This is one of my favorite stories, so I'm glad to see it's still going strong. Also, dun dun dun!  Kikyo. 


Anonymous (Chapter 6) - Thu 06 Apr 2023

I tried to put a happy face and it turned it into question marks.  To clarify, I'm loving this story.  I keep refreshing hoping for an update.  Lol


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