That fight scene was incredible! I hope Kagome gets to put the hurt on them too! A very very well written chapter!
Yay! An update! I was so excited to see a new chapter and devoured it as quickly as I could. I couldn't help myself. I was biting my nails in worry from the last chapter and the beginning of this one because Sess wasn't ready for this confrontation. But even though it was traumatic, it was a good thing in the end. Sure, Bakusaiga broke, but Sess realized his power and worth was more than his sword. And it was great to see Inu and the gang come swooping in to the rescue. And it was great that Inuyasha got to speak with his father and finally understand the relationship between his parents and Yohime. The cute moment between Rin, AhUn, Jaken and Chikatani was wonderful. I also appreciated Kikyou's brief appearance and telling glances at Yasha. I think it's pretty clear how much Kagome helped Sess when his sword broke and I hope that Kagome doesn't have to struggle too much to see it just as clearly. I mean, I get her desire to be of more help with the actual fighting and not be seen as a potential liability so hopefully her training with Yohime does wonders for her confidence and skill. What is the mystery around the Queen (King Kaien's mate)? I feel so suspicious about Sess's uncle wanting to meet with her...if this is something he wants, then it can't be a good thing. However, maybe her presence will end up a boon to Sesshoumaru's battle with his uncle?
Can't wait for the next update!
Pauly (Chapter 30) - Thu 31 Mar 2022
Eeeeee.......capítulo nuevo......y súper genial.....!!!!!....Me encantó y como siempre un buen trabajo en escritura.
Alright Kagome! Good for you.
Nice chapter. This is going to be very interesting.
Wow now that was an awesome chapter loved it... Wonder if Zetsub?maru has a way to take his mother's powers from her to make it his own. I can only hope Sesshomaru heals soon and that Kagome learns how to fight. So lets see what happens next....
Wow! That was quite the start!
Angervo (Chapter 30) - Thu 31 Mar 2022
A brilliant chapter. As always. What could that "flaw" in Sesshomaru's soul be? I have a feeling that we haven't found out everything about Kagome's role here. I mean, the bond is reciprocal, right? Sesshomaru being able to enhance Kagome's healing power must mean that a way exists for Kagome to enhance his power too. And not just being generally supportive. I was actually surprised about Kagome's passive role even when Rin was attacked. Maybe she is so worried about Sesshomaru getting hurt when defending her that she tries not to give him any reason to. However, they definitely should learn to fight together. This is getting really interesting. I am not asking you to hurry with the next chapter, though, because I am aware that you are working on two other stories as well and I love them all so much!
For all the preparing Sesshomarus parents did they sure were useless. Atleast in that fight. If they can't help fight the big guys they gotta atleast get the peons. I have NO idea why Sesshomaru is flawed!!! It's throwing me! His whole exchange with his uncle was just as confusing for me lol. Can't wait to find out what's really going on! I'm so happy Kagome is trying to get better. Was kinda disappointed she wasn't strong enough to help. Like at all really. Inuyasha was the one who pulled Sesshomaru from his spiral. Kagome just backed up Inuyasha. Love that Inuyasha was the one who was able to do what his mate should've been able to. Brotherly bonding! Please update soon!
Acb6293 (Chapter 30) - Thu 31 Mar 2022
The more I think about it the more it makes sense, because didn't they say that when he made the sword he could only do it because he surpassed his father in power?
Acb6293 (Chapter 30) - Thu 31 Mar 2022
You know what's funny? When I opened up the new chapter, I thought "yeah this doesn't get updated every day or week but with the length of the chapter it is pretty quick" then you comment about the speed of updates and I'm here to tell ya, you're doing awesome! I hope Chikatani is right and something happened when he was a child to be the flaw in him and why he doesn't have more then one tail
Lauren (Chapter 25) - Thu 17 Mar 2022
Slowly moving towards normal again. Will he be able to go back to training or do things need to actually progress for him to heal?
Lauren (Chapter 24) - Thu 17 Mar 2022
The misery is so unnecessary! Poor Sesshomaru, eternally suffering and doubting himself, slowly dying inside. And why doesn't anyone hug?! Everyone in this story needs a hug. They're so emotionally constipated and uncommunicative. It's exhausting
Lauren (Chapter 21) - Wed 16 Mar 2022
So that's why Chika looked sad. Because you're using the Greek gables and that means Kagome would ha e to drink to pass through the gate. Well, hopefully, his memories supercede the forgetfulness. I remember learning that they had the chance to cancel each other out. Guess we'll see very soon.
Lauren (Chapter 19) - Tue 15 Mar 2022
Ah! Chikatani is back. So he was helping them all along? And he's always been there, with Sesshomaru. Such a sweet onii-ssn
Lauren (Chapter 17) - Tue 15 Mar 2022
This story is amazing. I've been reading it slowly for the last week and a half, trying to pace myself so there were at least a few more updates before I'd reached where you are, but-- I honestly thought this would be more does through and fluffy than it is. I'm pleasantly surprised to find that you're dedicating a lot of time to develop both the plot and their relationship. I love that you're spending time on others, as well. It's not just 100% Sees and Kag and everyone else who's helping is incidental. They're key players, factored in by both out main villain (enough to plot to murder several of them), and by the author.
Thank you for not going into unnecessary detail when speaking of Sesshomaru's childhood. My imagination is vivid enough. I hope he can learn the truth and start to mend his relationship with his parents, and once he and Inuyasha learn the truth about their parents, that they can work on being better siblings.
Anonymous (Chapter 28) - Mon 14 Mar 2022
I like this story very much. Compliments to the author.
Nicole (Chapter 29) - Mon 14 Mar 2022
Holly shit!!!!!!!!!! This is my favorite story ! This was such an amazing update!!!
REDWOLF (Chapter 29) - Sat 12 Mar 2022
Oh know, hurry back. I need to read more. I hope Kagome is able to blast something. Great chapter!
Thank you for updating what you had this was an awesome chapter hopefully Sesshomaru is okay his sword can always be remade when he grows stronger. Wonder what Toga and Yohime are thinking as well.
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