Beautiful story!

Wow, that was an amazing story on Kelpies...  I grew up with wonderous tales of Kelpies watched movies as a kid there are more myths that i enjoy about Scotland my favorite movie was called Into The West a wonderful film.  Anyways thank you for bringing happy memories...  :)

Kelpie Sesshomaru is such a romantic, I really loved this. Especially these monster themed romantic stories. The ending in which they marry and Kagome becomes a kelpie herself with Taro as witness makes it better, like there is another human who will likely search folklore stories about water horses and add another not so terrible tale to the bunch.

This was a cute story, though I did miss the getting to know you phase. But them meeting as kids was adorable, along with the supremely awkward marriage proposal. I am struggling a bit with them ending up horses though lol...

This was wonderful. I wish it didn't have to end.

This was really beautiful.  I loved the weaving of flashbacks, even though I've never liked their use - these were placed so well that they didn't interrupt the flow like they can.  The weaving of lore and the unknown was lovely and I especially liked how you managed to keep Sesshomaru almost entirely in character - evcen though he wasn't a dog.  

Okay this was an absolutely amazing story. Holy crap. I LOVE it!!!!! Nothing bad at all to say about it.