Loved the alernate universe in this one. It was really unique and very enjoyable watching everything unfold. Thanks for sharing!

That was a wonderful, fun way to end this story. I totally enjoyed it. Thank you. 

What an interesting turn of events. 

Wow! That was very steamy. I don't think I've reviewed much but I am loving all the layers you have built into this story. 

I love how they all turned up at the shrine to help fix it. I was wondering if they were all demons in this or not. Just hiding it. And just how is that jewel going to play in with all this? Now this luscious chapter.   

I wasn't sure I would like this (I'm an older reader) but the story and the way you are handling it is wonderful. I like stories with several layers going on. Nicely done. 

Oh this is really good! I can't wait to read more!!

This story have my mind working so hard in wonderful good way. Enjoyung this story so much... does Kagome keep apartment as well or just live in shine? I want to make sure I am following correctly. Lot happens in chapter which is great thing

I am loving this story so far.  One question....I thought Kagome lived at the shrine with her mom, but chapter 5 said all she had waiting for her was cats and then Sesshomaru dropped her off at her apartment.    I was just a little confused.

Oh man wonder where Kagome's mind going to wander next...  This was a great chapter can't wait to see what happens next.

Wow what a revelation! hope you would update soon.

Now I'm intrigued, I hope we can read Sesshomaru's thoughts at some point and the mystery behind the events after the party and the guy who kissed him. Nice chapter!

Awh - how sweet he is, keeping an eye out for her 

I just finished chapter 2 and I was like.. where is chapter 3? It's actually an intriguing story and I would like to keep reading whenever you post so please keep uploading.

I was weary reading this doc because I'm not a huge fan of current time stories instead of feudal era ones, but nor I'm hooked trying to figure out how on earth this will be some a romance between sesshomaru and Kagome since he's gay lol 

Interesting start.  I'll watch and see where this goes.

Oh I like the plot of this story so unusual yet thrilling altogether... Can't wait to read more.