I loved this ... so odd but adorable!!! Great writing!!
That was cute as hell. Might I point out though, when you wrote 'leisurely raised to pin her with a disarmingly revertant look', 'slowly' would work better than 'leisurely' (he's very serious here, and leisure denotes a playful air) and I think 'reverent' is likely what you were teaching for instead of 'revertant'.
Tai (Chapter 1) - Wed 14 Apr 2021
Another great one by you! Your fics always make my day :)
Oh, thank you, thank you, THANK YOU!!! This is JUST what I needed this morning. Srsly. You have no idea how much you've brightened my day with this sweet little tidbit. *happy sigh* Now I'm ready once more to take on the slings and arrows of the powder coating business & continue the knitting that I'm trying to finish. Onward!!!
<3
~~me~~
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