I loved it! Great work, I love how you portrayed everyone in the story. Kagome really annoyed me but that's how she usually is. I loved how Sesshoumaru started to change at a slow pace, made it very true to his character. Thank you for this story. 

This story is sooo addictive my gods I just couldn't put my phone down 

I would've love to read about them being mated.

but I like the story

Felicitaciones!! Me encanto muy buena historia

Felicitaciones!! Muy bella historia

I have a feeling he won't be taking to the truth of Kagome's time too well when everyone confirms it 

A bored puppy is a bad puppy. LOL It's strange that Sango and Shippo and Rin, or even Kagome herself had never noticed the mark. Unless it always hid and it's sentient enough to show itself to people? Or does it only show itself when Kagome's upset? You said the scar where the Shining was removed flared blue too. Hmm~

Well, that was a different-ish start. No one is too OOC, but they're more aware and outspoken. I'm interested in seeing where this goes

Good action and dynamics between all of the characters. I really enjoyed reading this!

Whether he realizes it or not, Sesshomaru is changing, making adjustments to his actions and thoughts regarding Kagome and Shippo.  It's the small changes over time that turn into permanent change. I wonder if he even realizes the road he's traveling?

Great chapter here. Thank you for portraying Shippo as a like a little brother. It's a nice change. 

This was so good. I wouldn't have minded a lemon chapter but everything else made up for it. You're an epic writer, and hope to see what more you have in store. This is freaking ridiculously good for a first fanfic. Seriously. I hope you never ever stop. 

Loved this! Great job!

Love love love the story....is there a sequel?

just finished this story and i'm new to your work. i must say this is a great story. i liked it from start to finish. i've been a fan of sess/kag fiction for a long time. you write beautifully and the plot was new to me. i'm glad you decided to bring your work from FF.net. i liked how sesshoumaru showed how he cared about kagome. i was surprised you paired rin with inuyasha. i never woule have thought that could happen in a story, but you did it and i was glad to see it. i'm looking forward to reading your other works and i hope to enjoy them as much as i enjoyed reading this. keep up the great writing. c'ya'

Fantastic! I loved every second of reading this story. Thank you for sharing!