You did a beautiful job describing a healthy, loving Dom/Sub relationship between Kagome and Sesshomaru. It had just enough description to conjure up a vision of them and I loved the romantic, not mushy, aftermath. Great job. Lolling forward to more of your stories.
Nice. Miko' s have needs too!
No smut but I still found this erotic and sensual given how nurturing and affectionate Sess and Kags were towards one another. Aftercare was portrayed beautifully here and this one shot is far better than any BDSM portrayed in recent Hollywood films. Would love to read more, but it also stands on its own. Well done!
Lovely, Myth. Thank you for appropriately showing BDSM for what it is and esp. for focusing on this particular aspect of it. So much damage has been done to it through poor fictional representations of what this kind of relationship looks like. It's great to see a realistic picture painted. And I love how you use it to bring us moments of softness between our favorite couple <3
Thank you for writing this. I appreciate how you showed us another side of what a BDSM relationship could be. Honestly, I think this (aftercare and trusting someone when you do drop) is a very important part of the relationship. It would have been nice to see a little more of how their relationship evolved into such and the amount of trust they place in/with each other, but I do love what you wrote.
KH
I love you for this. Thank you. There really aren't many fics that talk about aftercare. It just sounds like you go hard and then get up and walk away like its no issue. and even 'regular sex' needs some level of aftercare.
This was beautiful, takeing a normally 'violent' subject and making it sweet. I also love that its Kagome who is the initiatior. I can easily see her being curious and eager to try something and bringing it to Sess. He's kinky too, and i honestly feel like her's are just a more modern and a more fleshed out version of his. Like he's into bondage but of course its a little more taboo or its a simpler version for the times.
I love this, I really do. thank you for writing this.
susie (Chapter 1) - Sat 25 Jul 2020
yeah, i loved it. it made my stomach tingle in a way which only happens when i love what im reading in the moment that i read it... its hard to explain. how is he so effing sweet to her, but so naturally powerful and dominant at the same time? hes sesshoumaru, thats how lol. love all the tender care and concern, yet the need and ability to give her what she (they both) want and need. and im not even usually a huge fan of bsdm, but i just love that they have their kinks, and they can work them out together, and that they have their thing that is just for them. also love that they make no apologies for liking what they like, and discovering it with each other. anyway, loved it, obviiously. great work!
Congratulations! Very fine job. This one is going to be added to my favorites as soon as I finish this review. This is one I wish could be a full length story. How they got together, when they got together, if she had still been in love with Inuyasha and realized before she committed that he wouldn't be able to meet her needs, or if she had already gotten over her puppy love and started to see others around her as options, the process of Kagome slowly and tentativly introducing spice into their sex life, Sesshomaru's reaction to it, etc, etc.
Still, it was great, and I shall enjoy coming back to read it again and again.
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