I have enjoyed your first chapter greatly and do hope you continue with the story, thank you for a wonderful chapter.
OMG I love this one! I hope you update really soon! First off I love that Kikyou doesn’t have her powers, and neither her or InuYasha seem to remember that when you make a selfish wish on the jewel that your wish is doomed. His wish is going to end badly for him and Kiky?. I also love how Kagome has been moving so quickly in her power. She started alone and now has panther demons, Kirara, dragons, the Lady of the East title, Shippo serching for her, Rin wanting to go see her, and now the most powerful Mate she could ask for.
I also love how Rin seems to know way more about what is going around then InuYasha. She might have learned this stuff from traveling with Sesshoumaru, but InuYasha doesn’t even seem to have his basic instincts to realize what is happening. I also like how she can she their power, and somehow has managed to not mention Kagome to anyone other then Kaede.
Very poetic, with a side of sass. I see karma is going to be dished out in great portions. Can't wait for the next chapter! Are we going to see our favorite fox?!
Wow! I loved every moment if this story. Rin is adorable. I love Kirara too. I cannot wait to see what happens next.
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OMG! I'm loving it! I can't wait to see the look on inyasha's face!! I'll be waiting for the next chapter.
Oh my, this has all the makings of an epic. Your descriptions are beautiful. But I most love the look into the more animalistic thought processes of Kagome and Sessh?maru. Please continue, i’d love to see some reunions, especially with Rin & Shippo!
Angel (Chapter 1) - Sat 07 Apr 2018
loving this story already please continue
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