Very cute I absolutely loved the ending

Great story. 

I truly enjoyed this story,  short but very detailed.   You are very talented.   So she bled because inu marked her in anger and sess save her with his love mark.  Very romantic,   I would  woop inu for what he did, in considered ass.

Wonderful!! Thank you.

This was so great, I did t know where this was headed based on the summary, but I'm glad I have it a chance

i adore demon kagome! though inuyasha's an ass in this, like really an ass, this was awesome!

This was a very good story and I hope you will continue to write more

I loved this delightful tidbit... sweet, but not saccharine; powerful but not overpowering. A different take on the possibilities after Naraku's defeat & the wish, and a mysterious but all-too-believeable relationship developing. Thank you so much for posting it here on Dokuga... and I sincerely hope this isn't the last time your muse tickles you with a Sess/Kag story!!

:D

~~Wiccan~~

I hope this won't be your last fanfic, because I really loved this! <3 It is so well and beautiful written :)

What a fascinating tale. Wonderfully written. You did a great job in creating your first S/K story. I hope you will write more like this if and when the inspiration hits you again.

Loved the story...thanks for sharing it with us.

Cheers!!!

I enjoyed this.  It was a unique plot that I hadn’t come across before.  I wish they hadn’t forgiven Inuyasha eventually, but that’s just my need for more stories where he isn’t forgiven after doing something like he did in this story.  Though I’m guilty of having one story I’ve currently posted where I plan on him not being killed off or doing something unforgivable.

Anyway, this will be added to my favorites so I can come back and enjoy it again and again, and possibly use as inspiration for a story.  Oh and I loved the water horse youkai.  Nice touch.

Loved this. Thank you for sharing. It was very well written. 

Oh my gosh I loved it!!!! I cried when she became mute and I couldn’t help crying when she ‘died’ and I think this is one of the best stories I’ve read in a long while!!! Thank you for sharing such an awesome piece!!! This was so lovely!!;) 

Beautiful story. You are very talented and I hope to read more stories from you. Good job.

Great one shot I loved it

And now he won't have to pout so much...Haaaa!  I liked it indeed.  Thanks for writing this- even though it isn't your usual fandom.  If you find you've got anymore S/K ideas lodged in your brain, feel free to unleash them on us.  And Kagome's horse friend was a nice touch. 

I loved this story.

  I was a little surprised that everyone besides Kagome and Sesshomaru seemed to be okay with what Inuyasha did to Kagome.  I understand being grief stricken, but to lash out at someone else physically is not acceptable, ever.

Other then that one detail, everything else was really great!!!  

I hope you write more Inuyasha fanfics in the future.

loved it  it is a truly good story line  too bad it's a one shot  

kept up the good work  you Re truly a talented writer  

Beautiful!

Thx for sharing!

omg this was quite the cute story!!