This is just my opinion, but this chapter was just too gross and disgusting. I thought she was going to run into Sesshomaru not a damn horse.
I skipped through some of the obvious parts.
I may be the only one to request this, but if this story is headed in this way or even if it was a fantasy of Kagome's I think the readers need to be warned as to what is ahead and give them the option of reading on or skipping it.
It is your story and I am not judging or condemning your story, it sarted out interestingly enough but was shocked by this chapter. My choice is that I will not be reading this story any further.
I am not flaming this story because other readers may like it, it is just not for me any more unless.
You are not a bad writer, I think you are good....so good luck on the rest of this story. Maybe I might read something else of yours in the future.
Definitely the village first.
She's gotta run into Sesshoumaru first. He will sense the demon bloos in her.
Great story so far, just wanted to get that out. I like the village option best, too many stories just jump in immediently to sesshomaru at the start, barely leaving room for Kagome to be able to accomplish things on her own. In my opinion it makes her seem weak, having to depend completely on him for something she could do herself.
Again, great story c:
Nice chapter and of course it was well written.
Why did Kagome not use her Miko powers to protect herself? Well I think she was not raped and if not I'm glad for that.
I would go for option 2...she needs to be tested against a demon since they are what she will be supposedly fighting against anyway.
Need more chapters. This is a great story...keep it going.
Cheers!!!
I can tell already this story will be really good~ I hope you can update regularly, and I really hope kagome does get the powers. :3
What a predicament that Kagome has found herself facing...indeed. She always seem to find herself in some of the wierdest situations.
I think it should be option one because it would be ashame to have her suffer through rape just to get these new powers that she seems to not want. These women are intriguing albeit their methods of recruiting is too zealous, outrageous and barbaric.
I am fascinated by this well written story and looking forward to the next chapters that can't seem to come fast enough for me. lol :)
Excellent job!
Cheers!!!
I can't wait to read more. I'd say option 1, but, if your intentions are to go really dark I'd say option 3.
Samara (Chapter 1) - Fri 01 Dec 2017
Out of these options I would go with the first one. Though, I am always a sucker for awakening unkown things about Kagome, lineage, powers, w/e... And from the comments the woman was making, I thought that might be a possibility.
The other two options seem a little too gruesome for the very beginning of a fic. And the cave paintings... Such a good idea! I can't wait to see where the story goes. Thanks for the fresh material!
A very intriguing tale. It is nicely written. I am looking forward to more of this.
I think option two might work I guess. None of the options give Kagome a chance to come out unscathed. That is sad.
Great job!....Cheers!!!
Please go on, option 1 or 2 please
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